How effective is the camerawork in my prelim and it is more effective in my thriller and how?
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The camera work in the prelim isn't that effective but when we first produced it we thought it was. We used a variation of shots but only had to move the camera about 3 times. It was very basic and you can tell this from watching it back. It doesn't look very professional at all. It's a lot more effective in the thriller as we thought it through so much more. We thought about the camera shots a lot more because we had to plan them out on a storyboard well in advance. On the day of the shoot we did end up changing some of what we had put on the storyboard but we still got plenty of shots and they were better than the ones which we had originally planned. We also realised after the prelim, the more shots you have the more variety you have to choose from when editing. When we edited the prelim we only had a very limited amount of shots which made it harder for it to flow - this was a lesson learn't. This was what we noticed when editing the thriller that
we had a lot more to choose from when choosing what shots we wanted.
How has mise en scene been used to create meaning, MES more effective in your thriller if so how?
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We hardly used mise en scene in our prelim. We used it a bit as we were filming people who needed to show that they were cowboys. We just did this by making sure that they wore cowboy hats as this is very stereotypical
We also used a bottle of alcohol and shot glasses to show that it was set in a bar. That was the only mise en scene we used. We wanted it to be set in a bar but we ended up just using a normal table and a few shots glasses. It won't have been very clear to the audience what the story line was trying to say. We have made the story a lot clearer in our thriller. We have set the scene in a restaurant and we managed to use a real one and a proper kitchen. We also used proper outfits for our actors. For example we had a chef who we dressed in whites and we put him in the kitchen so it was clear what part he was playing and what he was. We hope that our audience will have been able to see what scene we were trying to set. I think that its a lot clearer than our prelim was though as we didnt have much preparing for our prelim.
How effective is the editing, is it more effective in your thriller if so how?
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When we were producing our prelim, our knowledge of editing was very limited so we didn't know very much. Switching from clip to clip in our prelim was very snappy and so it didn't flow as much as we would have liked it to have done. It was very basic editing and it didn't look very professional at all. There were no tittles in it at all and no different scenes. It basically looked all the same. Where as in our thriller we took a lot more into account. We had to learn a lot more of the editing skills in order to make our thrillers look half decent. For my groups thriller we have put it into box sections. This means that the audience can't actually see exactly what is going on as the boxes only show half of what is actually going on. This makes it look ten times more interesting though and makes you actually want to watch the film to know what's going on. It was very hard to get to this point though as we had to figure out how to change it from being so slow to having quick passovers. We asked our teacher for help and we all came up with the idea of doing boxes and this is what we did. We wouldn't have been able to do this for our prelim as we didn't know how to do this. Compared to our thriller our prelim was just boring and doesn't look very good. The editing really does make a difference to the final piece.
How effective is the use of sound, it it more effective in your thriller if so how?
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In our prelims we got given a scrip that was already done for us. We didn't choose what we said and we didn't have any music. We didn't even use the technology to get a clear sound on the voices. We didn't even realise at first that you used things to get a clear sound. That was the only type of sound that we had in the prelim where as in our thriller we decided that we didn't want any talking as we thought it would be a lot more effective to just have music because of the quick passovers with our package. This does look so much better and it wouldn't have looked nearly as good with talking in it because it would have slowed it right down.
I have learn't that you have to be really organised to be able to film. It took us about ten minutes to prepare for the prelim where as it took us months to prepare for our thriller. You need to make sure that you have got the set prepared, that you have all the actors, outfits and all the equipment. This makes it very hard because you have to make sure that its all in order and that you are able to shoot. You need to have made a proper storyboard so that you know all of the shots you want and that everyone is in the right place when filming.
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Even though making the thriller did become stressful at times because of deadlines and making sure that everyone was ready for the actual day of the shoot we held it together very well. We managed to share out the jobs well and organise who did what well. This made it fair on everyone and then everyone knew what they were in charge of. We could have given it all to one person but that wouldn't have worked as they would have got really stressed and it wouldn't have been as organised.