Final Plot Narrative

We have changed our plot narrative for the last time finally. We had to sort out a lot of issues which we had due to time restrictions and getting permission. This is the final one and which we hope to do on the day. Some of the final plot narrative are the same as the previous ones but bits of it have been slightly changed.

The thriller starts with a oldish looking boy placing the package with the poison in it into a letter box which is attached to the wall. 

He looks around as he opens the letter box to place it inside and then walks off looking around at all times. Then an older man, middle aged, pulls up in a car. Doesn't turn the engine off as he wants to show that he isn't stopping, opens the letter box, takes the package and drives off at a rapid speed.

The man who collected the poison from the letter box is now sat in a cafe looking around consciously.  There are a few other people sat around but not with him. He then looks around before pulling the package out of his coat. He places it on the table. When the waiter comes over to take away his empty coffee cup he places the package onto the tray.

The waiter then goes to the other people sat in the cafe, one being another young looking boy and another being a middle aged man with his back to the camera. When he goes over to him he leaves the tray on the table and the oldish looking boy looks around before placing it into his jacket.

The older looking boy then goes off with the package. He places it onto a car tyre confidently. Then another slightly older looking but still young man comes along and picks up the package off the tyre. He then carries on walking until he reaches the kitchen.

He walks in the back entrance of the kitchen to shake hands with the chef. The chef is already preparing the food. He then opens the package and reveals the poison inside. We have decided that to make it clear to the audience that it's poison we shall use tik taks as they then look like tablets. 

The chef will then crush them into food, we will be soup, stir it and give it to the waiter to take to the table. We will finish it here. Left on a cliff hanger.