New ideas and changes

Today we discussed our tittle sequence again thinking about the new research we had done. We then decided that there are still many ways to improve upon it. We thought using our research that we can film it differently to how we thought. We are thinking of flicking backwards and forwards between the guy buying the cigarettes and the main character (the guy that gets poisoned). We thought this way it will make it clearer to the audience who they need to follow. At first we were just focusing on the pass over of the cigarettes, as that is what the poison is carried in. Normally in tittle sequences the camera will follow the main character and that is what we need to do to make sure the 
audience don’t get confused. 

When we realised that we needed to change it we started a rough copy of another storyboard. From this we could then see the changes clearly and draw in what we were changing.